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Thursday, June 26, 2014

46 good spm english model essays / free essay samples for o-level, ielts, toefl & muet writing, 46 model essay samples for spm english, o-level, ielts, toefl & muet writing,         descriptive essays.

• My Best Friend
• Describe an afternoon at the bus station
• A Horrifying Swim
• A Prominent Malaysian Leader
• A Demonic Gold
• My Favourite TV Programme
• The Night Market

Narrative Essays

• A Horror / Tragic Story
• Finally, A Voice Message
• That is the reward for my patience and hardwork
• A Holiday I Would Never Forget
• Couple Foils Robbery Attempt
• Write a story starting with: “The widow had to work hard to bring up her little son alone...”
• My Most Embarrassing Situation
• A Road Accident
• Autumn on Sugarbush Street
• Of Bombs and Ice-Cream

Argumentative / Persuasive Essays

• Haze: A Danger to Health
• Cell phones - One of Our Greatest Technologies Misused
• Importance of Studying English

Reflective Essays

• Are undergraduates ready for the real world?
• Does School Prepare Us for Life
• What would you do if you had a lot of money

Factual Essays

• Social Networking Website

Directed Writing

• Anti-Smoking Campaign Speech
• Informal Letter
• Informal Letter Sample
• Formal Letter: Letter of Application
• Formal Letter: Letter of Complain
• Complain Report About School Canteen
• Book Report
• Police Report on Accident

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How to prepare an A+ SPM English story essay to memorise

by Tan Le Tian

In previous blog post , I have shared with you how I got A+ in SPM English by memorising 1 story essay. Feel free to read that article first before continue with this 😊

I have also written an ebook with my full ghost story essay I have used for my actual SPM in 2014, and and show examples on answering different titles with the essay. 😍

Since then, I received a lot of questions on how to prepare a good story essay to memorise, and how to link it to different titles. 😝

This article will try to address all of them. So please keep reading.😋

Preparing your own unique story essay

Firstly, it is not advisable for anyone to memorise others' essay directly.

Because if two students (in same region) are discovered to use the EXACT SAME ESSAY, both their marks will be penalised by examiners.

So it would be best to write your own essay to memorise.

But if you find it difficult to write your own essay, one way to prepare a unique A+ story essay is by modifying a model essay to become your own. (at least half of it should be different, to be safe)

And don't share your essay with friends haha 🤭, my teacher has warned me back then.

For good model essay, perhaps you can get from seniors who have scored well in exam.

What is the requirement of the story essay?

1. story that brings good moral value.

Any reasonable story are fine, including common ones like car crash, flood, and fire accident.

It does not necessarily need to be a ghost story, like the one I have memorised.

Ideally, the story have to bring a positive Moral Value , because it is one of the grading factor.

For example, in my essay, the main character make a mistake to steal things because of poverty. But in the end, he got punished and learned from his own mistake, and promised himself to never do it again.

2. Avoid sensitive topics in story

Also, your story should be easy to understand and neutral for a wide range of audience (regardless of age, gender, culture, race).

Because your SPM exam scripts will be sent over to other states to be marked by examiners.

You never know who will be assigned to mark your essay. So it is better to play safe and avoid any potentially risky content.

Last year, a student has sent me a story essay about a sad love story between a vampire, a werewolf and a human girl.

I find the story very interesting.

But would the story be something acceptable and understandable to an elderly examiner with age 60 years old and above?

I don't know. So, my suggestion is to avoid sensitive topics like above, and play safe with universally acceptable topics .

For example, another student has sent me a story essay about flood.

It talked about how much parents love their children, and bravely protect them in the disaster.

I would recommend this type of story. Because parents' unconditional love to their children is a universally accepted value among different audiences.

3. Flexibility of the story of essay for linking

I know some people who memorise a few story essays instead of 1 essay and in exam they just use the appropriate essay to answer the exam questions.

For me, I think memorising 1 story essay is already sufficient to link to different titles.

Because I have taken some time to make my story more flexible to different type of title (happy, sad, funny, grateful etc.)

In my story, after "I" got chased by the "ghost" until the dead end in the hospital, anything can happen next.

Depending on requirement of the exam title, the "ghost" can be anything.

For a funny story, the "ghost" can be your friend playing a prank on you.

For a friendship / hero story, your friends may be the hero that protect you from the "ghost".

For a police story, the "ghost" may be a drug addict that has lost his mind. The policeman appear and catch the "ghost" before it has a chance to harm "I".

As you can see, there are endless possibilities and anything can happen in a story.

So when preparing your story essay, do make it more flexible for different titles.

By practice linking the same essay for many different titles, you will become more creative on how the story can lead to different type of endings.

How to improve quality of story essay

Assuming now you have a story essay (by modifying a model essay or writing your own), how to improve it further?

A quick way to improve is to include creative (good) phrases for weathers, emotions and actions of your story.

You can always "copy" and "memorise" those creative phrases / sentences from other good essay, instead of coming out with something on your own.

1. Creative Phrases for Weather

Regardless of your story type, most likely you will talk about the weather to set the mood of your story.

For example, my ghost story happens on a rainy evening (to make it feel creepy).

The simple way to write is:

"Last evening, it was raining heavily..."

But instead, it could be improved with the creative phrases below:

• It was a dark and gloomy evening, the skies were covered with dark clouds. One could easily tell that it would be raining cats and dogs soon.

• Lightning zapped through the skies, brightened my sight for a short moment. I could see the face of the creature as it slowly approaching me with a big evil grin plastered on her cold pale face.

2. Creative Phrases for Emotion

Regardless of the story type, most likely the main characters will experience some kind of emotion (sad, happy, anxious, fear etc.)

As I am writing a ghost story, the primary emotion is fear/anxiety.

The simple ways to write about it is:

"I felt very very scared when the ghost appear..."

Instead, there are better phrases to describe the tense situation:

• Gut-ripping fear flashed down the length of my spine as I heard the incoming footsteps.
• It was a frightening and ghastly sight! My heart was lodged in my throat. My legs turned to lead. My mind convulsed. Every muscle in my body screamed at me to flee, but I remained frozen with tears of fear welling up in my eyes.

If your character are laughing at something foolish, the simple way to describe is:

"They laugh at his foolish action ..."

Instead, it could be enhanced with some creative phrases:

• All of us burst into uproarious laughter.
• Daniel and Danny appeared from the back of the alley while laughing their heads off at my foolish acts.

If a person is very angry, the simple way is:

"He is very very angry..."

Instead, creative phrase could be:

• His face was purple with rage.

3. Creative Phrases for Action

Regardless of your story type, there will be some common actions that the characters will likely do.

When they faced a difficult situation (flood, chased by ghost), they may scream, run or pray for their safety.

Normal way: "I hear someone scream ..."

Creative phrases:

• Out of the blue, a loud scream pierced through the air.
• "Help! Can anybody hear me?" A mighty scream ripped from my throat.

Normal way: "I pray ... "

Creative Phrases:

• I could do nothing except praying to god, hoping to receive a saviour.

Normal way: "I ran away ..."

• I ran helter-skelter out of the nursery room.

4. Ensure the essay is free of grammatical error

As you can see from the examples above, there is plenty of creative phrases you can easily apply to enhance your story essay.

I prefer to memorise those creative phrases / sentences instead of using my own words, because it helps me to reduce grammatical errors.

In a story, past tense is usually used for all the verbs, which means, "ran" should be used instead of "run".

When writing the sentences on my own, sometimes I may forgot change the verb to past tense.

But I won't go wrong by using creative phrases / sentences structure, because they are already grammatically correct.

To ensure your essay is free of grammatical error, it is important to let your teacher check through your essay before you memorise and use it for the exam.

In summary, here are the 3 important points this article aim to emphasise:

• Prepare a unique story essay that has good moral value, no sensitive topic, and flexible to link to different title
• Use more creative phrases for weather, emotion and action in story
• Ensure the essay is free of grammatical error by getting someone to check through

Thank you so much for reading till the end. 😇

Since I published this post 2 years ago, a lot of SPM students have messaged me to help review & improve their story essay 😇

So if you need some suggestion in improving your essay, feel free to message me ya 😊

I will try my best to help and answer any questions 😝

Message me via IG: letian.tan or WeChat: skyletian97 😊

I am aware that the creative phrases and examples provided in this article may be insufficient.

I have provided more examples of creative phrases in the ebook with my full ghost story essay, feel free to check that out on spmpaper.me homepage.

You can also message me and I will send the ebook to you for free ❤️☺️

Thank you once again.

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• First Paragraph - Exposition (Beginning of your story) - 40-50 words
• Second,Third and Forth Paragraph - Events - 40-50 words
• Fifth Paragraph - Climax - 40-50 words
• Sixth Paragraph - Anti-Climax - 40-50 words
• Seventh Paragraph - Ending - 40-50 words

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The SPM Extended Writing (Continuous Writing) Essay Format To help you get started, let’s look at the structure of the Part 3 essay: Wordcount: 200 to 250 words Suggested time: 40 minutes You will be given a choice of the following tasks: article, report, review, or story. You must answer only one task in this part. Let’s look at a sample of the SPM extended writing (continuous writing) essay from the SPM trials in 2021. We’ll use this sample question as an example throughout this article, so follow along! SPM ENGLISH ESSAY CONTINUOUS WRITING Based on the given questions above, the writing formats in this section consist of an article, review, and story. You must choose one of the three tasks and use the guided questions to help you write your essay. Tips And Tricks To Write The SPM Extended Writing (Continuous Writing) Essay Choosing the right question for your essay can be daunting, so don’t panic! We’ll guide you through our easy-to-follow tips to help you start writing your essay. Tip 1: Read the questions carefully As this is an SPM extended writing essay, you must be clear about each task and read the questions carefully. It is essential to take note of the writing format as it varies for each task. You could also highlight the main key points in each question. At this stage, you might have an early idea of which topic and format you would like to write for your essay. Tip 2: Outline your ideas

The next step is to choose the question you feel most confident writing an essay for. You could also consider the writing format and ensure you have sufficient points and elaborations to help you get started. Here’s how: Identify the writing format for the task Write your points for each question Elaborate your points and provide strong reasons and advantages The next step is to outline your ideas based on the questions in the sample above. For example: First question: What other types of food would you like to be served? Serve balanced meals Offer nutritious options Second question: What other facilities should your canteen have? Comfortable seats Consider seat planning Third question: How can you improve your canteen? Promote the ‘No Plastic Bag Campaign’ Bring your own containers from home Tip 3: Draft your essay Now that you have some ideas for your essay, it’s time to start drafting! Drafting your essay provides an overview of what your essay would look like. Like the SPM guided writing essay, the SPM extended writing (continuous writing) essay also shares the same structure: an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Here are the ways to get started: Introduction To begin the introduction for your SPM extended writing (continuous writing) essay, you could include background information about the task; refer to the notes and questions. Your opening paragraph should not be longer than two to three sentences. Body To write the body paragraphs, you need to address the questions given. You can separate the questions into separate paragraphs. Here’s how:

The SPM Extended Writing (Continuous Writing) Essay Sample Answer My School Canteen A school canteen is the heart of the school and the place where students buy food during recess. Students should have access to a high- quality canteen in the school that provides healthy, quality food and improved facilities. The school canteen should serve balanced meals to the students. It encourages students to eat a balanced diet to improve their memory. The canteen should offer nutritious food options like fresh fruits and snacks. The canteen should also start a healthy eating policy to help students lead a healthier lifestyle. The school canteen needs comfortable seats and tables for students to have their break. The students should be able to easily find an available seat at the canteen. The seating should be enough for all students during recess time. It is also important to consider seat planning so it does not take up too much space. Another way to improve the school canteen is by promoting the “No Plastic Bag” campaign to reduce excessive plastic usage. Students should be encouraged to bring their containers from home. This way, we can lessen plastic and food wastage significantly, and no food will go to waste. All the above are suggestions to improve and upgrade our school canteen. Every student should have a good experience at the canteen that meets their needs. (221 words)

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SPM Essay Writing Guide – Format & Examples

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What is SPM?

Sijil Pelajaran Malaysia, or SPM, is a significant national exam that Malaysian students who have completed Form 5 education—typically at the age of 17—take. It’s crucial since it determines whether or not they can continue their education after high school and serves as a measure of their overall academic success. Writing an essay is a significant part of the SPM exam since it evaluates the test taker’s command of the English language , analytical reasoning skills, and ability to form coherent arguments.

SPM Essay Format

Excellent SPM essays may only be written by students who have a firm grasp of the proper essay format. An essay typically consists of three primary components:

1. Introduction

The introduction of an essay serves as the initial section, strategically designed to captivate the reader’s interest and provide essential contextual information for the subsequent content of the paper. The factors that contribute to the level of interest in an introduction are:

A hook: A hook is a provocative statement or query that grabs the reader’s attention.

Background context: Introduce the topic and its relevance in a brief background context.

Thesis statement: Clearly state your essay’s principal contention or goal.

The body of your essay comprises several paragraphs, each of which deals with a different aspect of your thesis or a related concept. When composing the body, adhere to the following guidelines:

Topic sentences: Each paragraph should begin with an introduction to the key concept that is succinct and straightforward.

Supporting evidence: To support your claims, offer statistics, examples, or supporting proof.

Smooth transitions: Make sure the transitions between paragraphs are reasonable, retaining the coherence of the structure.

3. Conclusion

The conclusion is the last section, where you restate your thesis and briefly review your significant points. To write a strong conclusion:

Summarise main points: Briefly summarise your main points from the body paragraphs.

Restate thesis: Rephrase your thesis statement to reinforce your main argument.

Closing thought: A provocative statement or call to action should be the closing thought.

How to Write an SPM Essay?

Essay writing is a craft that can be honed with time and focus. Write an excellent SPM essay by following this simple outline:

1. Understand the Question

To completely understand the criteria of the essay question, carefully read and consider it. Indicate the essay type (e.g., descriptive, narrative, argumentative) and the keywords that will be used.

2. Plan Your Essay

The key ideas you intend to cover in each part should be included in an outline. Planning ensures a clear essay structure and helps you organize your thoughts.

3. Start with a Strong Introduction

Write a captivating beginning that introduces the subject, establishes the mood, and expresses your thesis statement succinctly.

4. Develop the Body Paragraphs

Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, with supporting details and arguments. Make seamless transitions between ideas.

5. Craft an Impactful Conclusion

Reiterate your thesis, restate your essential points, and give the reader a thought-provoking conclusion.

SPM Essay Writing Tips

Take into account these helpful tips to improve your essay-writing abilities:

1. Read Widely

Your vocabulary and knowledge base will grow due to exposure to various reading sources, including books, newspapers, and articles.

2. Practice Regularly

Consistent writing practice improves your writing abilities and increases your comfort level while confronting various essay subjects.

3. Seek Feedback

To pinpoint areas for growth, get comments from teachers, peers, or family members.

4. Time Management

Use your time effectively during the exam to allow enough time for preparing, writing, and reviewing.

5. Grammar and Vocabulary

Pay close attention to your grammar, spelling, and language choices for your writing to remain coherent and clear.

Types of SPM Essays

SPM essays can take many forms, each requiring a different strategy. Here are a few common types:

1. Narrative Essay

It tells a tale with aspects including characters, setting, and plot, frequently from the viewpoint of the author.

2. Descriptive Essay

It uses sensory details to create a realistic image of a person, location, or event to capture the reader’s attention.

3. Argumentative Essay

Presents reasons and proof to persuade readers to take a specific stance on a hotly debated subject.

4. Expository Essay

Gives details, justifications, or analyses on a subject backed up by examples and facts.

5. Reflective Essay

Reveals one’s own feelings, thoughts, and experiences while highlighting the lessons learned from a certain incident.

SPM Essay Example for Malaysian Students

To provide you with a practical reference, here is a brief example of an SPM essay provided by Malaysian Essay Helpers :

Example Title: “The Impact of Technology on Education”

The digital era has completely transformed every part of our lives, including education. Classrooms have changed as a result of the growing use of digital devices and the internet, with both positive and negative effects.

Paragraph 1 (Positive Impact)

The educational process has been greatly improved by technology. Interactive instructional software and applications provide pupils with fun ways to understand difficult ideas. Additionally, e-learning platforms have made it possible to receive a degree from a distance, eliminating geographic restrictions and fostering lifelong learning.

Paragraph 2 (Negative Impact)

However, there are negative consequences to using too much technology in the classroom. The decline of conventional methods of instruction may lead to a shortage of students with strong critical thinking and interpersonal skills. Additionally, the digital divide between kids from various socioeconomic origins has the potential to make educational disparities worse.

In conclusion, it is undeniable that technology has significantly influenced modern schooling. To guarantee that every student receives a well-rounded education, educators must strike a balance between tech-based instruction and conventional teaching techniques, despite the fact that technology has many benefits in terms of accessibility and learning opportunities.

For Malaysian students who want to perform well on their exams, mastering the art of SPM essay writing is essential. Students may improve their writing talents and create compelling essays highlighting their knowledge and critical thinking skills by adhering to the correct essay style, employing effective writing approaches, and practicing frequently. Remember to experiment with different essay formats to increase your writing versatility and use other people’s work as inspiration to enhance your own.

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GUIDE TO WRITING ESSAY SPM SECTION B- STORY

This document provides guidance on writing a story in continuous format with 4 parts: Part 1 begins with a suspenseful situation, telling part of a scary dream. Part 2 introduces the narrator, Muhammad Arif, and provides personal details about his family, school, and extracurricular activities. Part 3 discusses a movie the narrator watched recently with an interesting plot about a man who finds a remote control that allows him to control events in his life. Part 4 is meant to conclude the story by reflecting on its moral and tying it back to the narrator's own life experiences. Read less

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• 1. GUIDE TO SECTION B/ CONTINUOUS WRITING PAPER 2 FORMAT 1: WRITE STORY THAT HAVE ENDINGS PART 1 ( BEGIN YOUR STORY WITH A SUSPENSEFUL SITUATION ) It had been raining all night but I still could not fall asleep. Maybe it was because of the coffee that I had drank earlier to keep me awake as I was studying to prepare myself for the year end examination that is just around the corner. This time, I want to get better result than my Mid Year Exam. That is why I tried very hard to achieve it. My parents also had promised me to take me for a trip to Korea if I get excellent result. But that was not the real objective. My real objective is to repay my parents’ sacrifice that they had gave upon me all these years raising me up. I looked at the clock on the wall. It was already 11.00pm. My parents who were out to a wedding ceremony since 3.00pm were not returned yet. I was not alone at home because my sister was also at home. She had just returned from her college during maghrib time. But maybe she was asleep because she closed her bedroom door when I walked by a few minutes ago. I tried to call my parents to ask them where they were but they did not answer their phones. I tried several times. I was getting worried. I wanted to call my sister but I was quite lazy to get out of my room so I just called her. But, her phone was out of coverage. STRANGE…… So, I walked out of my room to go to my sister’s room. As I just wanted to go to my door to get out…..I heard my sister called my name….from downstairs. Maybe she was in the kitchen. “ Anna…………………..Anna……………………..” I responded by saying Yes. I quickly got out of my room to go downstairs. But, as I was approaching the stairs which was near my sister’s room. Two hands grabbed me from behind and pulled me into the room. I tried to scream but the hand closed my mouth. It was my sister. She asked me to be silent. I asked her why she acted this way. Didn’t she just called me. She said NO. She heard the calling too. Suddenly…. “ Kringggggggggg………………………………………….” That was the sound of the alarm clock that had woken me up from my sleep. The story above is part of the scary dream that I had just experienced. Thank God
• 2. PART 2 ( WRITE ABOUT PERSONAL DETAILS ) Before I go further with my essay. Let me introduce myself. Muhammad Arif. This is my name. It is a beautiful name. It has very interesting meaning. I was borned in Kuantan on 23 April 1998. Now, I am staying with my parents in Kuala Lipis. I have 6 siblings and I am the forth child in the family. My father is a clerk and my mother is a food hawker at a stall. Although we are not rich but we are happy. Now, I am 16 years old and I study at SMK Chini Timur. I study at the class 4 Alpha. My class has 21 students and the class teacher is Pn. Zita. Pn Zita is a very nice teacher but strict. All my classmates respect her. At school, I joined several activities. I joined Uniform Unit, clubs and sports. Firstly. Uniform unit. I joined Police Cadet. For this unit, I was selected as the March Commandant. Among the activity was the Rifle Shooting Training at Temerloh. Secondly, I joined English Language Society. I was elected as the secretary. Among the acti vity we had conducted was a trip to British Council in Kuala Lumpur. Thirdly, I also involved in sports. I represented my school and District of Pekan for Softball game. As a softball player, I went to a tournament MSSP in Bera last March. This year I am in Form Four. Next year, I will be sitting for the most important examination in my school life. SPM. I will try very hard to get excellent result. After SPM, I plan to further my study at a university and take Medical Course. My ambition is to become a doctor. PART 3. ( WRITE A STORY PLOT ) Enough about me. Let me return to the story that I wanted to tell. Recently, I watched a movie. The story was very interesting. It has good moral values that should be shared with others. The story was like this. Michael Newman is a loving father and husband, but he's got an office and a career he sees more often than his own family. To only make matters worse is a boss who takes everything for granted, including advantage of Michael by dangling a promotion in front of his face. But when one late night trip to a Bed, Bath and Beyond store for a new remote control, Michael finds himself in the possession of a new kind of remote control, developed by an eccentric inventor. A remote control so significant that it allows Michael to be able to fast forward, rewind, pause and practically control all the events in his life. So much to an extent that it becomes a luxury for the overworked man who finally gets some quality time with his family and his life. But not everything lasts forever as Michael is about to find out, when the remote control begins to malfunction, causing Michael to deal with the consequences. PART 4 ( ENDING OF THE STORY ) As a conclusion, the moral of the story is we must always appreciate with what we have. When I looked back into my life. ( USE THE ENDING GIVEN IN THE INSTRUCTION)
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